Chapter 3 Pages 111-112

I know we've been on this one conversation a while, so I hope it's not too boring. Hopefully the magic lore is interesting enough that it's not dragging too, too much. I wanted to upload more pages at a time to get through it quicker, but didn't have time.

I also hope you guys enjoy watching our collective son happily explaining away because he's in his element.

Thanks always for reading!

13 thoughts on “Chapter 3 Pages 111-112

  1. More lore, singing, and character Q&A’s (may I suggest Mootilda?)!

  2. Not boring at all, GIMME ALL THAT GOOD MAGIC SCIENCE.

    1. Agreed! Magic systems are fascinating.

  3. It’s a pivotal conversation in the characters’ understanding of their situation, so it makes sense to dwell on it long enough for the readers to understand both its content and significance. Plus, we get other little highlights throughout, like the acolytes’ training exercise, another reminder that Rav is well-versed in the history of the previous champions, and as you said, seeing Ivan in a situation that lets him be more confident. The only things I can think of that have made longer conversations from comics and other story formats I’ve read in the past feel boring and drawn out is when the characters spend too much time explaining or discovering things that the reader is already aware of, or when the characters engage in a long moral discussion or debate that’s clearly used as a mouthpiece for the author’s opinion. While we do get a little bit of the former here (we know Eggie’s power is in her voice), there’s so much new information for us to digest in the conversation as a whole that this being a revelation to the characters doesn’t feel like, “Oh hey, congrats dumbasses, you finally figured it out!” Instead, they’re discovering something that we’re privy to thanks to narration, but doing so by reasoning from information that we didn’t have yet, so even something we already know feels like an authentic new discovery.

  4. Wait… who was Shara?

    1. Shara was one of the previous champions! You can see a portrayal of him (and all the other champions) on page 15 of Chapter 2.

      1. thank you so much!!! I know I’m not the only one and I am certain future readers will be very thankful as well!!!!

  5. @David W – so well put! This comic has really grown on me, and I’m loving the lore, worldbuilding, and character development. It feels good to see Ivan in his element.

  6. I love the moment when the characters of the story start to realize what we, the audience, have thought or known for some time.

  7. Eggie saves the world with the power of Rock and Roll!

  8. Next week: Eggie learns FUS-RO-DAH!

  9. Take it easy and relax. We will be here when health and life allows it.

  10. I love your work and look forward to every update. Take care of yourself and prioritize your health first! Sending you well wishes. ❤️

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