:) Thanks always for reading and for your patience.
The song "Please be Slow" is here in youtube video format:
If the World is Ending, Please be Slow
That puts an end to Chapter 3. I can't believe it took 2 years. Very happy to have you all along for the ride.
I'll probably take a short break after this upload - a week or so. There'll be an intermittent discussion drop, the same way there was after Chapter 2.



















27 thoughts on “Chapter 3 Pages 343-359 (Please, be Slow)”
SPAM
FUCK YES
SPAM
ALSO, PONGLES IF YOU SEE THIS YOU SHOULD RE JOIN THE DISCORD
Merida
The bow. It flowed through the group… except Eggie. I wonder if she’ll have to use it, and who was playing the accompaniment.
Merida
My first comment didn’t go through? It was just “aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh” because I was excited the pages dropped.
vladspellbinder
Hum, so, four seasons. Eggy is spring, a joyous return from winter’s rest. As-*cough* Rav is summer, a bit harsh but with a cool side. Malene is winter, calm, a bit cold at first but with warmth to be found, a gentle rest. Ivan is fall, a cooling time of contemplation and reflection of the year gone by. That’s just my view on it.
Thanks for the song and the comic.
Frederick
I had not noticed how long Ivan’s hair had gotten. They don’t look gaunt in this page and the clothes don’t look loose. Did they find food?
For those wondering -Oridell has blue eyes and straight hair. https://adventureswitheggie.com/comic/chapter-2-pages-192-195/
ThisIsNotDan
Not to pick a fight, but in the comic you linked, Oridell has NO eyes. Also, Isaac concedes that everything the church thinks it knows about Oridell could be wrong, since it was 700 years ago, so every representation of the historical Oridell in the comic is potentially wrong. That would definitely include details about his appearance.
Plus 700 years is plenty of time for an immortal man to alter his appearance, even if the church got it right.
Fred
https://adventureswitheggie.com/?comic=the-ballad-of-oridell-chapter-2-pages-53-81
Not everything has to be connected. A story can have spare characters.
Linneroy
Don’t comment here often (not sure if I commented before, actually, I may have), but this is spectacular. I’ve adored the way you intertwine the media of music and (web)comic since I first found your work, and this song and the accompanying pages are your best work yet, in my opinion. Very emotional and I love how you gave the song time to breathe, despite – I would suspect – the likely urge to keep it shorter, since you have to also draw the images to go with it, so longer song means more work. I look forward to seeing where this goes 🙂
DT Saranya
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to comment. The kind words mean a lot to me.
Bob the Moose
Wonderful! I can’t wait for more!
cretinlung
I don’t easily cry.
I have to wipe my tears now.
Thank you.
DT Saranya
Hope it’s happy tears, in which case I’m glad to hear it. 🙂
Lenny
This comic is so beautiful, the music is wonderful, the characters are well-developed, and the worldbuilding is so vibrant. This is really one of the best comics I’ve read in a while – I binged it all this afternoon. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
Tincantater
Aaah so beautiful 🥹🥲🥹What an incredible story. What an amazing song. Thank you so much.
Jim
It’s really something special
Penguinmanereikel
Now THAT’S why this one took so long!!
Obojo
Absolutely amazing! Multimedia storytelling- THIS is how webcomics flex beyond their paper predecessors!
Edgewater
My gosh, you have a lovely voice.
Thank you ever so much.
Sparkax
So beautiful!!!!!
Doyou noticeitsthesameguymakingthesestupidusernames?
*Applause*
Annie
I’m sobbing, but in the best way possible. So beautiful done. Thank you.
Anne
Awww what a beautiful song ❤️ the art and music together makes for something really special. Also, if you’re making an album of these songs at some point, I would definitely listen to it ☺️
myusernameisbrunhilda
I love this! Thank you so much for this wonderful and amazing world.
Zeppep
Every time I’m blown away by your incredible talent, I showed this to my wife and she cried even though she doesn’t know the story or the characters. I will be sharing this with friends and family as it is an amazing experience even without the context, keep up the amazing work!
ThisIsNotDan
How did I know the exact right speed to scroll during the OOOOOooooo section? I didn’t even feel anxious like I was going to be late to whenever the lyrics picked back up. Same with the dialogue interrupt from the mysterious assassin’s group.
All that to say: well done!
Micah
Gosh, that was really lovely again, your voice fits this so well. Looking forward to chapter 3!
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